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Thanks Floopy the feekback is welcome. I was thinking that I was making the description "too large" myself. I'll refer to your 2230 and see what I can do to condense the TDS1012 down to. | Thanks Floopy the feekback is welcome. I was thinking that I was making the description "too large" myself. I'll refer to your 2230 and see what I can do to condense the TDS1012 down to. | ||
--[[User:Jyohe|Jyohe]] ([[User talk:Jyohe|talk]]) 20:36, 24 May 2019 (PDT) | --[[User:Jyohe|Jyohe]] ([[User talk:Jyohe|talk]]) 20:36, 24 May 2019 (PDT) | ||
Okay, I've saved what existed this afternoon and replaced it with a revised format to try to reduce the amount of information in the description area. If I need to restore what had been here I can still do that. | |||
--[[User:Jyohe|Jyohe]] ([[User talk:Jyohe|talk]]) 23:14, 24 May 2019 (PDT) |
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As this is my first edit/creation for this product page I'd appreciate some feedback. --Jyohe (talk) 20:33, 24 May 2019 (PDT)
Hello and welcome! I'm probably the least qualified person to talk here, but if your open to suggestions. Note that everything I say is just are just opinions, so take it with a grain of salt.
- I notice that the "specifications" section is very long. Maybe you could condense a lot of the info into the introduction section of the page? A bit like here 2230, you can probably find many more examples.
- A bit more global, but we usually name manuals by the part number. Like 170-8019-00.pdf that way we don't end up with three or four of the same manuals with different names.
--Floopy (talk) 18:04, 24 May 2019 (PDT)
Thanks Floopy the feekback is welcome. I was thinking that I was making the description "too large" myself. I'll refer to your 2230 and see what I can do to condense the TDS1012 down to. --Jyohe (talk) 20:36, 24 May 2019 (PDT)
Okay, I've saved what existed this afternoon and replaced it with a revised format to try to reduce the amount of information in the description area. If I need to restore what had been here I can still do that. --Jyohe (talk) 23:14, 24 May 2019 (PDT)